After reading my thank you note on the inside sleeve I think it lacks character and does not portray the persona of my artist at all. In order to gain inspiration before creating a new one I will watch interviews and read blog/website posts from the artists Lana Del Rey and Marina and the Diamonds, to discover how there personality comes across through their writing.
I watched this interview from Lana Del Rey. As she speaks about her music and fans it is apparent just how much passion and love she has for both. She speaks of her inspiration, and how she wanted to be a singer at a young age. Comparing my original thank you letter I definitely feel that it lacks character, and needs to have more personal views.
Original thank you note:
I would like to express my gratitude for everyone that made this album become more than just a dream. The support from relatives and friends definitely gave me the confidence to both write and produce this album. I would also like to thank my fans from the bottom of my heart. I will never be able to express in words just how much you all mean to me.
New thank you note:
I would like to express my gratitude for everyone who has made this dream a
reality. Writing was always my ultimate passion from an early age and I still find it unbeiliveable just how heartwarming the responses I get are. I will never be able to express in words just how grateful I am to each and every one of you, but I would just like to say thank you.
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